Sunday, March 6

You Were

you were the light to my dark. the biscuit to my gravy. you were the saved text to my phone. the one i stalk on facebook. you are the one that every song still reminds me of you. the only song i wanted to sing. the warmth to my cold. you were the maze in amazing. you were my sun on a cloudy day. you were the knead to my kneaders. the underground railroad to my escape.
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  1. H.J. MackeyMarch 7, 2011 at 8:38 AM

    The words "you were" gives it that completely different meaning form "I'm thinking about you." It left me with the curiosity to know what happened. Really cool idea!

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  2. AnonymousMarch 7, 2011 at 9:44 AM

    I really liked your idea and your last sentence. You didn't write a lot but that made it so awesome i think

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